by BeautifulxMess Apr 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Slowly drifting away into your everlasting eyes. |
Very enticing poem. I'm not into guys, but if I was... that would be excellent. The way you make the reader see your vision is extraordinary. I was completely lost in the amazing write. Good flow, great word usage, and the concept was beautiful... 5/5 |
Goshh you have really good love poemsss. i like them alott. good job. |
by Michelle18
Love the ending to this poem... very nice. |
Your poems are really awsome |
by ctmskm
Nice choice of words. the poem flows smoothly and shows good emotion. keep it up.. 5/5 |