by PygmyPuff
This is a truly wonderful poem. I love how the first stanzas are stuffed full of details, yet it isnt nearly "cramped" or "thick". I love the reference to eyelashes. Thats someting I look at when I consider a guy. Kinda strange, but I do. That and scent. lol |
by Curry
I loveee this poem too. it reminds me of this guy from a while back but he wasnt who i thought he was..but anyways wonderful poem. 5/5 |
*... wow basically covers it 5/5 you are really an excellent poet and really got the talent. The poem is sooo beautiful. I loved the way you could describe it and really capture the whole thing and about the eyelashes and such. wonderful. i loved the 1st stanza and then i *fell* in love with the last. haha |
I really liked this poem. i think you did a fabulous job on it. I liked the words you used to describe him. it was just great. |
by Melpomene
I loved this poem the imagery of this perfect guy sparkled beautifully in my mind it was great. I loved the discription i think u did a wonderful job portraying it throughout this poem. beautifully penned piece of poetry you have here. Well done on a great job~mel |
by Kaila
Wow!! the imagery was phenomanal (sp?)!! The words were sensational!! I love love loved this poem and I'm voting on it for best poem or whatever so nice job! |
by Nicole
5/5 beautiful poem. it reminds me of the joys of love. well done this is a well written almost inspirational poem |
Tongue tied words that soar my wings to fly. |
by Goran Rahim
So great |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time. |
by tyanna
WOW!! Very good poem!! Very detailed yet not so much that a line is never ending and hard to take in.. Wonderful job! The flow and wording was extrodinary!! Keep writting! |
Aw this poem is SOOO sweet I love it.. I think one of my favorite things about this is the way that you used a lot of metaphores throught the poem a lot of people dont use to many of them anymore or if they do they aren't as creative and make them something that can be overlooked, you however chose to go the way it should be done. The last stanza was one of my favorites, I definatly felt the happiness and love radiating from this peice, well done. |
by BitterSweet
I loved it! Great work. it was so sweet. I sent it to my friends it was so good. 5/5 |
by lacey
I love this poem |
by stefanie
Wow. very passionate. you have a way with words. great job. and thank you for the comments. |
by mel
I really,really,really liked this poem and it was real what i mean is it come from the heart, most people write about love because they desire it but seems you have the real thing =) 5/5 really enjoyed reading it had good flow.....takecare mel xxx |
by Wallace
Very good poem, really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time. |
by Dillon
Its a very well written poem I just dont like those kind of love poems |
I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM...I THOUGHT I FOUND THE PERFECT GUY BUT TURNS OUT I DIDN'T...LOOKS LIKE YOU HAVE...IT MAKES PEOPLE LIKE ME FEEL LIKE THERES HOPE....CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WRITING IN THE FUTURE..... |
This was lovely thanks for sharing it |