Comments : The Perfect Guy

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    This is a truly wonderful poem. I love how the first stanzas are stuffed full of details, yet it isnt nearly "cramped" or "thick". I love the reference to eyelashes. Thats someting I look at when I consider a guy. Kinda strange, but I do. That and scent. lol

    {5/5}

    [PymgyPuff}

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    I loveee this poem too. it reminds me of this guy from a while back but he wasnt who i thought he was..but anyways wonderful poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    *... wow basically covers it 5/5 you are really an excellent poet and really got the talent. The poem is sooo beautiful. I loved the way you could describe it and really capture the whole thing and about the eyelashes and such. wonderful. i loved the 1st stanza and then i *fell* in love with the last. haha

    -Lith

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    I really liked this poem. i think you did a fabulous job on it. I liked the words you used to describe him. it was just great.

    If only I could describe everything about you.
    I'd go on forever because it could never die.
    All I know is that I have a love that is true.
    Everything about you makes you the perfect guy.

    I really liked this stanza the most. wonderful poem, 5/5 keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I loved this poem the imagery of this perfect guy sparkled beautifully in my mind it was great. I loved the discription i think u did a wonderful job portraying it throughout this poem. beautifully penned piece of poetry you have here. Well done on a great job~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow!! the imagery was phenomanal (sp?)!! The words were sensational!! I love love loved this poem and I'm voting on it for best poem or whatever so nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5 beautiful poem. it reminds me of the joys of love. well done this is a well written almost inspirational poem

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Tongue tied words that soar my wings to fly.
    My favourite line . Detailed but not crowded . Really good imagery . It was beautiful . The ending just really wrapped the whole thing up .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    So great
    so nicely written
    and
    so romantic

    you have done another great job with your great talent. truly you are a talented writer and your poems are more done great.keep up the great work like always. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    WOW!! Very good poem!! Very detailed yet not so much that a line is never ending and hard to take in.. Wonderful job! The flow and wording was extrodinary!! Keep writting!
    Tyanna

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw this poem is SOOO sweet I love it.. I think one of my favorite things about this is the way that you used a lot of metaphores throught the poem a lot of people dont use to many of them anymore or if they do they aren't as creative and make them something that can be overlooked, you however chose to go the way it should be done. The last stanza was one of my favorites, I definatly felt the happiness and love radiating from this peice, well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by BitterSweet

    I loved it! Great work. it was so sweet. I sent it to my friends it was so good. 5/5

    -BitterSweet

  • 17 years ago

    by lacey

    I love this poem
    it was great
    perfect 5/5 score
    =)
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    Wow. very passionate. you have a way with words. great job. and thank you for the comments.

  • 17 years ago

    by mel

    I really,really,really liked this poem and it was real what i mean is it come from the heart, most people write about love because they desire it but seems you have the real thing =) 5/5 really enjoyed reading it had good flow.....takecare mel xxx

    i thought that poem was really touching oh yeah by the way im mels mate i really enjoyed reading your poem it really touched my heart it seems like you enjoy writing id really like to write my feelings into a poem but im thick lol any way take care sammy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    xxxxxxxxxxx :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 17 years ago

    by Dillon

    Its a very well written poem I just dont like those kind of love poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Scherder

    I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM...I THOUGHT I FOUND THE PERFECT GUY BUT TURNS OUT I DIDN'T...LOOKS LIKE YOU HAVE...IT MAKES PEOPLE LIKE ME FEEL LIKE THERES HOPE....CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WRITING IN THE FUTURE.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    This was lovely thanks for sharing it