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by icarus   Apr 17, 2007


A door swings shut
opening windows and walkways
to a different time, a different place

there are no memories, no tears
just an undefined moment
free of all that is

Reality fades away
creating a limitless world
insubstantial as air

images suppress a dark secret
that you are suffocating,
drowning in a dream

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Nice, i really like this poem. keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, this poem is majestic. Atmosphere is superb. Third stanza is powerfully written but second stanza is still greatest. Wording is excellent and topic is incredibly picked.

  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Poetry at its finest. Way to write about something non cliche. I enjoyed this!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great choice of words and really powerful imagery.
    Short but amazingly written, truly deep.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    As a poem expressing how you felt at the moment, I think it was pretty good. you had described things well and the last line was my favorite:
    "that you are suffocating,
    drowning in a dream"

    good job 4/5 :)

    Marjan

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