Very cute indeed with an excellent rhythm to allow the flow to run smoothly
5/5
*Gem*

U commented me and i always return the fav. so i just had to say i'm lovin this. it's like sexy but not to sexy u kno........i guess u can say it's sweetly sexy. lol.

I really loved this. you described what was happening so well with out it being to intense. very well done. and thanks for the comment on my poem.

Awww a very sweet poem, i loved the flow and rhyme of your poem,

excellent work