Its is a beautifull dedication :) i give it a 99/5 :) it deserves nothing less :)

Reading this poem definetly brought back some hard times. My brother has packed his bags more than once and walked out on us. But hes always come back. I couldnt imagine what it would be like, not having my brother here. Thankyou for reminding the beauty of having him close. I hope you get to talk to him one day.

All the best.

Oh sweets, i hope you make contact with him again, chances are, he's just trying to adjust to his new life.
Keep hold of his heart and he'll come back

"One word, I fly
Two words, I remember
One goodbye, forever I cry
The worlds lost in your ember"

A beautiful bittersweet ending..
5/5
*Gem*