Suicidal Pain

by XxPainfulDeathxX   Apr 17, 2007


Shattered hopes
broken dreams
unbearable pain
bursting seams

trembling legs
unable to support
the life she had
the life CUT short

shining blade
the crimson flow
self-inflicted
pains that grow

with each cut
her soul divides
into pieces
with the lies

"i fell" she says"
"down the stairs"
but everyone knows
and no one cares

and so she decides
if no one cares
why should she
if no one dares

to talk her through
to help her out
with her problems
with her doubt

no one cared
so the water runs red
red with her blood
and now shes dead

no more worry
and no more doubt
she has learned
what this life is about

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Nice poem man. Felt it all the way through. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dan

    Woah dude.. this is deep.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Verdada

    Really good but sad :( you have a way with your words GOOD JOB!

  • 17 years ago

    by silence kills

    Very nice ^_^ i always like good poems with short lines

    and so she decides
    if no one cares
    why should she
    if no one dares

    i really liked that part for some reason, keep writing, you're good at it :] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, that is a touching poem, did this happen to someone you know? 5/5 from me, amazing!

    "no one cared
    so the water runs red
    red with her blood
    and now shes dead"

    SkYwEe

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