Wow, that is a touching poem, did this happen to someone you know? 5/5 from me, amazing!

"no one cared
so the water runs red
red with her blood
and now shes dead"

SkYwEe

Very nice ^_^ i always like good poems with short lines

and so she decides
if no one cares
why should she
if no one dares

i really liked that part for some reason, keep writing, you're good at it :] 5/5

Really good but sad :( you have a way with your words GOOD JOB!

Woah dude.. this is deep.. 5/5

Nice poem man. Felt it all the way through. 5/5