Comments : House of Wolves

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    Wow. Your imagery was awesome as well as your word choices.

    The idle night beckons thee to the dark stone
    To howl at the stars and to grieve there alone
    Humble red blood from the depths of a wound
    Tears at thy soul as thee flees from the moon.

    Very dark and sad images this creates for the mind. Awesome !
    Take Care Your friend Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I was drawn to the wolves title as I love wolves. This is a dark and very mood evocing piece. Great images and mood. Very impressive!

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow Jeannie.. i got such shivers and chills after reading this..
    I've just finished watching 'Dog Soldiers' about werewolves and that scared the bejubus outta me, then i come and read this!
    I think i want a comfort blanket now! lol
    Excellent imagery!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    .... *speechless*

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very well written dark piece full of scary and moving images....love the whole wolves, blood and angels theme...love these lines:

    From deep in the bowels of the night comes the cry
    Of the innocent victims that were taken from sight.

    and also these lines...my favorite I think

    The torture of souls that were silenced by death
    As the wolves gathered round to take their last breath

    From beginning to end...absolutely fabulous! 5/5 Debbie