Always Misunderstood

by Julienne   Apr 17, 2007


I say please
and you say no
This aint how its sposd to go
My friend is leaving can i say goodbye
No you think its all for a guy
But you dont get my
situation
Just give me that droning incantation
Please please please
But you say no
Im left to cry, I cannot go

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  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this was really short but to the point which was good. but i gave it 3/5 because it was kind of..just blah and really odd. it kind of didnt make sense. but keep on writing and you'll get better!:]

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    This is good. I think you could do more on it though. Expand it more.
    Overall its good 4/5

    |Sarah|

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    It was a good piece..I think if you added to it it would be even better though.. Also..when you're writting try to touch it up a bit as far as punctuation and spelling goes...When you use commas, periods, and quotation marks it always helps the flow of the poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    *this is good starting piece, you can definatly feel the emotions and frustration throughout the poem. While a bit more of a storyline or description would be enjoyable the poem was still nicely done. Take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    * wonderful poem.
    short, but good.
    well done!
    take care.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea

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