Wow, this is such a powerful piece of writing. Each line led to the next with a beautiful transition and then composed a brilliant stanza. My heart is seriously beating faster after I read this. Stunning job. 5/5.

**I'm right here. one touch away... **

such a powerful ending. amazing stuff. this is a great piece. keep it up. and i love how u refer to the sunshine as looking for loe bc hte sunshine can represent so many things in life...destiny, our deepest desires...etc

5/5
melissa