Its soo true. I can't even put words down to describe the brilliance with which this was written. 5/5.

Just amazing. best poem ive read for a long time.
-Josh

**For fear of loosing a best friend
But is the yearning for a lover
greater than loosing a brother?**

such a strong question wow...thats a herd descion to make but i think if that person that important to you you should at least talk to them abotu it, mayeb not try anything but dicuss what it would be like if you were more than friends...like a hypothetical...
So I loosely, hugged goodbye my best friend
Then- a wrenching unwanted separation
like a teddy bear pried from a child's arms
I looked backed and watched...
as I saw this boy I loved,
walked away,
for the millionth time.
He glided and faded softly out of sight
just like the sunset of my favorite summer.

**I love love the teddybear analogy that made this poem so strong, i felt that. than how you said * I saw this boy I loved,
walked away,
for the millionth time.** that was so powerful its like i literally felt your heart break at that moment. great job...keep it up

**Sometimes, its hard to say "I love you"
To the people you love the most.**

i think this should be more a p.s. kinda thing bc this is already imprinted and hinted at as the moral or theme of the poem, but thats just a suggetion bc its kinds stands out and ruins the tone and the flow of your poem....keep it up thought great job.

melissa