Comments : The Ring

  • 17 years ago

    by Tonya

    I wrote this after my now ex left me, he really hurt me and even though we tried one more time to make it work it didnt. i loved him with everything inside of me and now he is gone and with someone else. so i guess i have to come to the relazation that he has moved on and i need to. hope you guys enjoy reading my poems. if you see anything that i need to improve on let me know. thanks everyone!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is written straight from the heart. Heart breaking write. The kids always get hurt :( Hope things get better for you. Keep writing. Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by silence

    Wow sounds almost exactly like my situation. Scary almost. My boyfriend of 3 years was a 'father figure' to my son and actually he was just asking me about him last night and he's been gone since January. It made me cry. I hope things get better for you. If you need a friend I'm a good listener :) My son just turned 4 in April.