You know what, love hurts sometimes, but i deal with them by writting poems. so this is about on of the brake ups i have gone through. hope you guys enjoy reading my stuff...let me know what you think and let me know if i need improvment anywhere. thanks everyone

Tonya
How very sad. It is always painful to lose someone we love. Great job on portraying these emotions.

try to stop you
because i just dont want this to be true
im afraid of getting hurt again
afraid of losing you

Your pain and sadness cry from these lines.
Take Care Cindy