This is my favorite! I think you're writing is beginning to show your softer side. The first love poem was dead on point...but this one over rules ALL! This one is beyond words! I like this!!!! No I LOVE this!!!!!!!!!!!! As you said of mine...THIS IS YOU! People are going to fall in love with you here. You're 28 for goodness sake....how did you NOT know of this greatness years ago??? You know anger and pain can produce some of the best writes...HAHAHAHA You should have been writing during your baby mama drama...DAMN! I would have loved to read some of those!! :) I'm kidding but I'm serious. Nice write Mr. I

Very unique and original but very well written!
you have captured the spirit of love in this write and I can really relate.