Help Me

by CrazyNlove   Apr 17, 2007


Its 11:43 and i don't know what to do
i want to go to sleep
but all i think about is you
i wish that i was with you i just don't understand
how one day i can hate you
then want you to be my man
i pray each night for my wish to come true
i need help i just don't know what to do
being with you makes me feel free
nobody around its just you and me
when we are together i have nothing to say
i think of you all night and day
do you like me as much as i like you?
i pray deep inside that you really do

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww its so cute :) hihi! did it really happen :P and again good job on this one! keep writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Beautiful poem. The flow was flawless. You do what i used to do, not add grammar, or capitalize the I's... trust me, it makes a HUGE difference on how people see you as a poet and your poetry.

    I love your meaning, and I have written many poems very much like this one myself. I enjoyed this one particularly because you added a time, adding a touch of originality and truth to the poem.

    Great job m'dear,
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    That's cuuute.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, i like it because it sounds so true, like it actually happen, did it?

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh the love in this poem was amazing. well done! it was of a lover wanting their loved on to love them back. so much love.

    5/5 David

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