Oh the love in this poem was amazing. well done! it was of a lover wanting their loved on to love them back. so much love.

5/5 David

Very good poem, i like it because it sounds so true, like it actually happen, did it?

That's cuuute.

Beautiful poem. The flow was flawless. You do what i used to do, not add grammar, or capitalize the I's... trust me, it makes a HUGE difference on how people see you as a poet and your poetry.

I love your meaning, and I have written many poems very much like this one myself. I enjoyed this one particularly because you added a time, adding a touch of originality and truth to the poem.

Great job m'dear,
5/5
~Stephen White

Aww its so cute :) hihi! did it really happen :P and again good job on this one! keep writing :)