I can totally relate to your poem. i like it short and simple. keep it up!!

Ohh wow!!!! Amanda!!!this is just.. wow... i like how you can descripe it.. very well written, i want to thank yuou for your comments on my poems, very well appreciated... you're going on my favorites list..
-Marina.
p./s.. cant wait to read more!!!

Wow its short but very very good... but kinda sad in a way but again very very good... not great

I love this i can so relate