by TalkItOutInTheRain Apr 17, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
She's haunted by her past, |
by icarus
Good poem. The second line of your second stanza seemed a little short though and I think it might have messed up the flow a little. I think maybe you should add a 'was' in there but maybe not. I'm far from an expert. Good job though, keep it up. |