Dear God, I Beg Of You

by stefanie   Apr 17, 2007


Dear God, I beg of you
To give me the strength,
To hold on and be strong
And fight on towards great lengths.

Dear God, I beg of you
To help me stay sane.
So much is going on
But I'm blinded by all the pain.

Dear God, I beg of you
To take away this pain.
I know it's self-inflicted
But I got lost in life's twisted game.

Dear God, I beg of you
To please heal my heart.
I let my heart soar
And got it torn apart.

Dear God, I beg of you
Please dry all my tears.
They burn as they form
As I see them in the mirror.

Dear God, I beg of you
To help me find the light.
So I can stand up for myself
And fight for what is right.

Dear God, I beg of you
To stand by my side.
Everything is falling apart
As I slowly begin to die.

Dear God, I beg of you
Please don't forget me.
I'm asking for your help
I'm coming to you in need.

Dear God, I beg of you
Hear this prayer to you I send.
I really need your help
So I'll just be waiting right here til then.

Amen.

Stefanie, 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    WOw this poem was really great and i loved it I like how it was a REAL poem not like the others its outspoken It was very creative and new GREAT POEM! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy

    Great poem but I think it just needs a bit of work. I don't think the rythm was quite right in some parts so it didn't flow right. Other than that, great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    Brilliant poem I love it very much and it is very sad, it is lovely. The only thing that I will mention is that Amen is only usually said when there are allot of people praying together rather than just one person praying, however everyone prays differently and the is no wrong way so this may be the way for you I have said this only to let you know and not to try and change anything as I’m not sure if this was intentional or whether you didn’t know.
    Your friend Adele

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I like the repition of "Dear God, I beg of you ." It worked (: sometimes, you would repeat words right after one another tho . In like the next line or the very last stanza, and it didn`t fit together when I read it aloud, BUT still a good poem (:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I love how you have Amen rhymes with the last stanza. The flow was better on this one.
    The rhyming shceme didn't seemed forced.
    God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayy

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