Stefanie, beautiful poem. its very deep, and i can relate to it alot. Excellent job, keep writting<3

-megg

Awhh, i really liked this. The repitition really worked well and added effect to your poem. Mostly the rhymes were very well done, they were only a few parts where they sounded jsut a little bit off. The descriptoins were good and I liked the simple style. Nice job 5/5

Pretty good, im not one usualy for poems asking god for strength, but this one is good. well writetn too. (:

Tom

Its awesom i really lik it :D

Very sad poem, but very good. This poem is well written,has alot of emotion, and is wonderful. 5/5

~Chelsea

Wow, I cannot express how much I liked this poem.. It had my attention from the first line into it. GREAT work, great words, great use of the words, wonderful message, I loved it all but I think my favorite part was.

"Dear God, I beg of you
Please dry all my tears.
They burn as they form
As I see them in the mirror.

Dear God, I beg of you
To help me find the light.
So I can stand up for myself
And fight for what is right."

I can relate to this poem very much so. You're a wonderful writer, one of the best I've seen. Adding you to my favorites, so keep writing. And again, great work. I am still Wow'd over here. lol
-Ally

I love how you have Amen rhymes with the last stanza. The flow was better on this one.
The rhyming shceme didn't seemed forced.
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

I like the repition of "Dear God, I beg of you ." It worked (: sometimes, you would repeat words right after one another tho . In like the next line or the very last stanza, and it didn`t fit together when I read it aloud, BUT still a good poem (:
..__MiNDYY

Brilliant poem I love it very much and it is very sad, it is lovely. The only thing that I will mention is that Amen is only usually said when there are allot of people praying together rather than just one person praying, however everyone prays differently and the is no wrong way so this may be the way for you I have said this only to let you know and not to try and change anything as I’m not sure if this was intentional or whether you didn’t know.
Your friend Adele

Great poem but I think it just needs a bit of work. I don't think the rythm was quite right in some parts so it didn't flow right. Other than that, great job!

WOw this poem was really great and i loved it I like how it was a REAL poem not like the others its outspoken It was very creative and new GREAT POEM! =]