That was really good! yet sad at the same time!

I really liked this poem. It has a lot of emeotion behind it. Very nice.

Wow......... i like the story very interesting and this was such a wonderful poem... it written so well

Great poem! I really liked it! I know how you feel too! Sometimes guys only talk to the girls with the good looks and "perfect" bodies and they never reaalixe how much fun the "other" girls can be! Keep writing!