Very funny. Not at all what I expected.

It's about time I made it
After a hectic day for me
I can finally relax and enjoy
My white chocolate martini.

Great job!
Take care Cindy

Lmao, excellent ending! You're giving me a craving now and my day hasn't even begun!
I wonder how many people feel like this at the end of every working day?? lmao
Excellent piece! Loved it!
5/5
*Gem*

HAHAHA!
I so wasn't expecting that ending at all.
I love it!

Hahahahahaha, this is funny indeed, all the time i was thinking of something else and now i feel guilty...lolololol

cool one

all the best and take care

Lol that was very clever ending , good work.

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Nicely written.....very descriptive....love the twist at the end!

OH MU GOSH
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This made me laugh!! what i liked about it was the fact that not only did it have an amusing ending, the rest of the poem was written really well and not necessarily in a jokey way, great use of words.

Excellent poem of the everyday world , well written and wording was great , loved it the way you expressed everything down to a "T", wonderful job ,:Traffic at this hour
Is crazy and bizarre
Everyone seems to be out
I don't even live that far
been in them shoes for many years , good job keep it up , your friend Tracy d. 5/5

It's cool how you write your funny poems of your job. I've never written any of those before. 5/5

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Lol i agree i wasnt expecting the ending but nice poem regardless 5/5