Wow this was so intense..amazing stuff u have hear great job and plea comment some of my material if you get the chance...bc im working on creating a poetry boook and getting it published so that would mean so much thanxs.

melissa

I'm speechless... You amaze me with your poems. This one is so deep, and it is excellently written. The whole idea for the poem is very interesting and unique. The ending is great, too, very captivating.
Whole piece has powerful and effective atmosphere, created with superb wording.
Every stanza is flawless.
5/5 from me, but you deserve more for this one. This poem is going to my favs.