Beautiful in its simplicity. Nice job Bogie :-)

So sweet and soft. Like warm misty rain delighting the soul :) I truly enjoyed reading this poem!

Bogie, this is absolutely beautiful. Ah, to find love that wonderful...

"Holding hands never letting go
As our sharing and caring grow
With spirits high and souls aglow
Perfect compo Cancer Virgo"

These lines are perfect.

Nice one. It shows your feelings about your relationship and that you do feel very strong for this person.

Its very short but its very good ......you expressed your feelings and got the point across i like it 5/5