I Wish That...

by Romantic Lover   Apr 17, 2007


I wish that this world would be safe from harm
I wish people wouldn't second guess when we lend a helping arm

I wish that boy in Virginia didn't have a gun
I wish those poor kids weren't at the end of their run

I wish people didn't judge each other based on their color
I wish people treated others equally, discrimination wasn't even a factor

I wish that drugs, murder and suicide was something of the past
I wish that the news spoke of generations and memories that last

I wish women didn't say that jobs are restricted for men
I wish women stepped up and proved that they can

I wish that healthcare was offered equally to the needy
I wish that people didn't suffer because they weren't wealthy

I wish that early education didn't always focus on a textbook basis
I wish that students had a chance to face real world cases

I wish that my kids learn from all my mistakes
I wish they realize I've done everything for their sakes

I wish that I don't fail the one I truly love
I wish there was an angel guiding my way from above.

*Written for a contest* write about your wish - I guess I got carried away and well, anyway...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Beautiful, is what I can say. You wrote about your wishes but they weren't just wishes for you. You wished pain away from others here. You wrote that you wished suicide was the past. You just wrote for other peope and not just yourself. I believe you have a guardian angel watching over you. I also believe you have a muse which inspired you to write this beauty. ~Mel

  • I think everyone gets carried away when they start to write about what they wish. Great poem. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    It was very well written. If only our wishes like that would come true... *sigh*
    Great work..

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on this piece. The things you wish for are things I think most of us can relate to.

    I wish that I don't fail the one I truly love
    I wish there was an angel guiding my way from above

    There is someone guiding you from above. Great job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Beautiful poem, i really loved how you said like, i wish i front of everything, it really had a lot of meaning to it! nice work!---tara