by Romantic Lover Apr 17, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I wish that this world would be safe from harm |
by Melpomene
Beautiful, is what I can say. You wrote about your wishes but they weren't just wishes for you. You wished pain away from others here. You wrote that you wished suicide was the past. You just wrote for other peope and not just yourself. I believe you have a guardian angel watching over you. I also believe you have a muse which inspired you to write this beauty. ~Mel |
I think everyone gets carried away when they start to write about what they wish. Great poem. 5/5 |
It was very well written. If only our wishes like that would come true... *sigh* |
by Cindy
Great job on this piece. The things you wish for are things I think most of us can relate to. |
by Tara
Beautiful poem, i really loved how you said like, i wish i front of everything, it really had a lot of meaning to it! nice work!---tara |