I entered this contest too, you're gonna be tough competition, lmao
But seriously, all the wishes in this piece are wishes that are thought every day by the people in this world.
Thanks for bringing them to attention
5/5
*Gem*

A beautifully expressed poem, it reflects the true heart that you own and its really nice to have people like you here around us.

keep writing

all the best and take care

Very inspirational and thoughtful,each stanza has deep message ,very well penned .Wish if only things be like this in our world.

Take care
chavii.

This was so beautifully written...
I think this is one of your best poems and I loved the repetition.
The opening had me hooked and from there on it just got better.
Good luck in the contest!

Beautiful poem, well written and very true,5/5,,,,,thank you

That was good...wish it have more imagery but it was well written...nice job

This is a vry good poem, and i found it really good that you used this reall massacre that happened in the real world to make a poem, but you made it serious and showed that you were sorry to see it happen, good job.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Beautiful poem, i really loved how you said like, i wish i front of everything, it really had a lot of meaning to it! nice work!---tara

Great job on this piece. The things you wish for are things I think most of us can relate to.

I wish that I don't fail the one I truly love
I wish there was an angel guiding my way from above

There is someone guiding you from above. Great job!
Take care Cindy

It was very well written. If only our wishes like that would come true... *sigh*
Great work..

Josie

I think everyone gets carried away when they start to write about what they wish. Great poem. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Beautiful, is what I can say. You wrote about your wishes but they weren't just wishes for you. You wished pain away from others here. You wrote that you wished suicide was the past. You just wrote for other peope and not just yourself. I believe you have a guardian angel watching over you. I also believe you have a muse which inspired you to write this beauty. ~Mel