I Wish

by ImNotPerfect20   Apr 17, 2007


I wish I was pretty...Like the girl you love!
I wish I was pretty... Because it hurts so bad.
You can't deny that I'm dying inside.
Just this once why can't I fall in love!
If it was up to me I would be that girl.
But that will never happen because your heart belongs to her.
You were my prince you were my love.
But all I am is that nice girl no one wants to love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh, very nicely written and so heartfelt, but just to let you know every person has a different kind of beauty. your beauty can be something that no one else have in this world.

    great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a nice poem. I can relate to this poem. it was a great read. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I'm finding myself giving you more 4s and 3s than 5s, and I think this poem helped me understand why. You make quite a few capitiliztion and punctuation errors throughout the writing, so please go back and edit those. I do, however, like the passion you put into the poem, and you chose a nice topic and appropriate title.

  • 17 years ago

    by TracyM

    I like this one. Something I can most definately relate to. Its short. but you get everything out in the lines you have, so it doesnt really need to be any longer. Nicely written. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    I LOVE this poem, only you better not think that...because I will have to kick your butt lol...sorry you know I have to

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