I like it. Is it yor very first poem or have you been writing? But anyways it was pretty good except for this line:

"When I really, really do."

I dont know about it, to me it didnt really go with the flow of the poem. But overall it was pretty good. Keep it up!!

Omg i lvoe this so much!! this is going in my favorite poems its so good to find a gd poem all the otheres are shite(the other people not you lol)

Awww I loved this poem, and like you said it's wonderful to be able to relate to someone else's work. The poem flowed pretty well, there were a couple spots where it kinda snagged but you're very good with your rhyming.
Def keep up the good work.
Awesome job.

It's pretty good and detail but you could try taking some i's out of it to make it flow more and have the reader feel what your sayn' but i do likeit alot!

Cute poem... and its something i can relate to=)
well done and well written

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Love the poem; although it's not that special.
I guess you just write what you're feeling, like i do :) and i think those poems are the best ones.

I really can relate to this poem.. I thought this was really great.. You can feel the emotions in it as well.. 5/5

Wow..I really like this one. It's really really good and i completely understand how you would be sick of all that..i was/am sick of it with my ex to..good job tho

I loved it, so cute! and Dont worry I understand how you could be sick of that lol great job, flow waqs pretty good too

Rather sad but well written...

Wow this poem is really really good.. i actually added it to my favorites.. this is amazing and soo many people including me can definitely relate to this.. excellent job.. i can relate to every stanza which makes it such an amazing poem.. great job =] and thanks for the comment.

The way i can relate to your poems is amazing and that is why im putting you into my fave authors. you are a really good writer. once again 5/5
the last stanza was my fave in this one. *2 thumbs up*
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-I'm sick of having to walk away
When I really want to stay.
I'm sick of wanting to talk to you
And when I do, there's nothing to say.-
^ My favorite stanza, I know the feeling.
Good poem, nicely written. Rhyming is very good, too.
5/5 from me

Awww....this one totally tugged at my heart and I just want to cry. This reminded me of that poem from the movie 10 Things I Hate About You. I was on here looking for a poem tonight not thinking i'd find anything interesting, and here I find this AMAZING poet who is sooo sooo sooo talented. I mean your poetry ROCKS! I really love it and can't wait to read more!
Charisma*

Very well written..this has to be one of my favorites! everything flowed so well and i know many people can relate to this..i know i can..u use ur words so good in all of ur poems! 5/5!