I really liked this poem the lines were short but effective and it showed how much your friendship means to you. A beautifully penned poem to someone im sure means alot to you. Well done~mel

Beautiful smile,
makes me have one to.
Because you smile,
I smile with you.

I liked that stanza a lot (: It`s true for [almost] everyone . The lines were short, but pretty effective . It was a cute poem, but kind of gave off a message as looks are all that matter . But I get the poem and the friendship within it .
..__MiNDYY

I like this poem and all. but it seems kinda over rated. like your trying to explain a guy but then it turns out being your best friend, doesnt really make much sense to me. 4/5

AWww, that is cute!
Short, sweet, and cute!
My favorite kind!
Keep it up!
God Bless 5/5
<3tayyy

Awh i loved it! Loved the discriptions and all. Ha, i first thought it was about a more then a friend but it seems its not. Its way good besides my bad judgment
(^_^)
~Sid~

Ohhhh wow im so slow. that would explain the title *feeling way stupid** hehe my fault

Maybe i should pay her a late night visit. just kidding. great poem kaila

your servant:
david

Wow great poem! it's really nice of you to write a poem for a friend! i'm sure she liked it. it's really good. 5/5

~Kristina

:D Your friend is lucky to have you writing this for them:D This is a great poem!

"Sparkling eyes,
stare at me deep.
Like they're reading me,
and my secrets to keep."

I have to agree that a first it sounds like it's about a guy, but either way it's a great poem:D

Writing with short lines is, perhaps, your distinct style of writing. I'm giving you some of my props to that. As on the whole, I think it's quite a sweet poem. Its descriptions fit perfectly to my bestfriend's; it reminded me of her.. and that is why I like this.
Thanks for sharing.

Ok, so this poem is really good. I like the imagery and deliverance of it. It isn't so much descriptive as it is what you say that makes the reader able to picture it. Marvelous! 5/5 -unattractive1

Sweet. 5/5

Haha nice poem Kaila...i got make a poem about my best friend sooner or later but im to lazy >_>
Another great read...loving it. 17 more poems to comment from you.

Ha, awww that's so adorable!
Such a cute poem to write for
your frined. I hope she liked it.
Ah wonderful! 3/6 God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^__^)

Aww... that was so sweet.
Your imagery was vivid & the flow was flawless throughout the poem. I can tell that you care dearly for your friend. :] Such a cute dedication. 5.5 Keep writing!

"Beautiful smile,
makes me have one to.
Because you smile,
I smile with you."

^ My favorite stanza. Wonderful job!

Stephanie Lynn .+.

"Beautiful smile,
makes me have one to.
Because you smile,
I smile with you."
this I would have to say is my favorite stanza. The flow was flawless. The emtion was strong
and the imergery was vividly real. Good job.

Don't use slang within poetry unless it is a slang poem or song, therefore use "them" instead of "em" Other than that this was a wonderfully written poem that came right from the heart. Great work.

Peace, Joe

Aww.. this is sweet.. i love your style.. all of your poems so far are so simple but still you get all your messages across strong.. this poem was no different.. my only suggestion is that i think you could've spent more time describing the fun moments you've had or how much your friendship means to you rather than how your friend looks :D

Superb write about friendship. I am always there for good friends. Well penned.