My suicide note.

by LifeThroughMyEyes   Apr 17, 2007


***this is a poem thing that i wrote a while ago when i was going to commit suicide...obviously i didnt do it...but ne ways...heres the poem***

goodbye world.

you hated me and caused me to hate myself.

i hate who i am and what i have become.

the one thing that kept me alive for so long left me here to rot tonight.

i couldnt handle the crap, so im giving up.

this is an ode to joy, and an ode to life,

my ode to pain and my ode to strife.

i end it all, here and now.

without regrets,

i end it now.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Very good poem that I totally understand since I've been there more times then I care to think about and still am there =P Very great job at expressing the emotions behind it =) 5/5

    Thank you for the comment on my poem by the way =) Each one always means a lot to me ^_^
    Rhea

  • 17 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    I love it...nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Giovanni

    You should never try to end your life no matter how hard it is because you're alive for a reason and that's because your mission on this Earth is not completed yet. Everyone here has a purpose whether it's a small one or large one because everything you do impacts the people that care for you. Someone always cares for you. This is a quote I made to help me hang on...

    "Hold on and never let go because even the brightest of lights may drift away into oblivion sometimes..."

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Well written poem love :)
    yet very sad.
    im glad to know that you didn't go through with it.
    if you wish you should join this club:
    Inner Pain: Life Depression, Self-harm And Eating Disorder
    maybe it could prove helpful to you?
    anyway 5/5 love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hey this is very good, i like the style of it, well done xxx take kare xx

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