In A Place Of Death

by CHOKE   Apr 17, 2007


You left me to die
In a place of death
Leaving me lonely
In a place to fret

You cut my skin
Laughing at my pain
You smiled
As my tears started to rain

I gasp for air
As you smother me
I sigh tearfully
As you leave me

Now Im alone
Dying inside and out
I try to get away
But I can't even shout

I start to die
I slowly decompose
You come back to see me
To see what God chose

I am dead
No longer alive
Everything is gone
No reason left in life

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    I liked this poem too, for the most part I enjoyed all of your work. I would love to see if you could write about other subjects funny inspirational ect I think if you widen your foundation as a write the better you are to explain yourself in general well just a thought Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I like this one too. I can relate once again. The flow on this one was almost perfect. well penned, I could feel your pain, and sadness from reading this one. Keep up the good work, and don't stop writting. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dead Inside

    Woah. That seems like something i would write. I really like your style. keep on writing

    cesar

  • 17 years ago

    by Bianca

    This poem is really good. It kind of reminds me of what happened 2 me except I lived. If you need 2 talk 2 sumone I am here. U can email me at QueenOvDenil23@yahoo.com. I hope u keep writing!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    Great poem!

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