Great poem!

This poem is really good. It kind of reminds me of what happened 2 me except I lived. If you need 2 talk 2 sumone I am here. U can email me at QueenOvDenil23@yahoo.com. I hope u keep writing!!!

Woah. That seems like something i would write. I really like your style. keep on writing

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I like this one too. I can relate once again. The flow on this one was almost perfect. well penned, I could feel your pain, and sadness from reading this one. Keep up the good work, and don't stop writting. 5/5

I liked this poem too, for the most part I enjoyed all of your work. I would love to see if you could write about other subjects funny inspirational ect I think if you widen your foundation as a write the better you are to explain yourself in general well just a thought Plot121