She wanted to leave, hide, and be alone
Loving the peace and solitude
Hidden secrets, regrets, and lost trust
^Love this.
I recomend that you use the same amount of words or just about in each line of your stanza's just so the flow is a bit better and easier to follow. The poem was good. Keep working on writing! God Bless 5/5
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That was amazing!!!..i loved it, and you are one of my favorite writers on here... great job..5/5 and thanks so much for the comment!

5/5 excellent poem. i loved your use of words, flawless. I kinda lost the flow a couple times but otherwise an absolutly gorgous poem. In a lot of ways, it reminded me of myself and i really liked how i could connect with it. excellent job. :)

I loved the title for the poem; seemed to fit it quite well.

I loved how you used words that sorta challenged readers vocabulary, such as; vociferious, scrutinized, and dissent.
This poem was quite amazing. A lot better than your last, may I say. It seemed as if it came from deeper within, than the other one.

Overall; 5/5
I loved it. :]

I enjoyed this poem alot, Much better then your last one. Your vocab was god although i found some lines to be shorter then others maybe if you shortened them down a bit by changing the syllable count it would be better. Other then that well done~mel

Sad but beautiful.. I enjoyed this poem! :) well done!

Your word choice is wonderful. You make the reader think. I love this one. It is moving, sad yet so beautiful. And beautifully written as well. Keep up the great work 5/5