5/5 excellent poem. its so cute.. and kinda sad at the same time. i LOVE the imagry created and your use of words. perfect. im sooo in that possition now. hehe.

-Lith

The title of this poem had me interested from the start. This poem was beautifully written and heartfelt i enjoyed it alot. The emotions were so strong. The was such an enjoyable read. Great job on an amazingly penned poem. ~mel

This is sad.... but so amazingly penned and beautiful especially your choice of wording was very unique and gorgeous. it was a fascinating poem, 5/5
gabriella

Aww this was really good I loved it you did a great job and the words were nicely put a lot of people try to use good words and it sounds off so nice job

The emotion in this poem was very strong.. I thought you did a great job and shouldn't change a thing.. The title caught my attention and the poem kept me interested till the end.. Wonderful job..keep writting!

This poem really touched me, it is so great how u come up with it, deep emotions...
i also really like your flow and the rhyme.
another great poem by you
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it, keep it up

5/5 love the way the poem starts out so positively only to end on a loss. beautiful poem. keep writing.

I like this poem, itis very well written. It has a great flow, and is nicely pinned. 5/5

This is great. the imagry was amazing! i loved it. the flow was good and the wording was good. 5/5

Beautiful. I really like this poem.
It was very cute and sweet!
You're an awesome writer! And you
have great talent. God bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Wow I loved this poem... the last stanza definalty was my favorite. I really liked how you showed all the love that this person had for their dream love. I cant quite tell however if the person is made up and not real of if the person is dreaming about someone that they lost. I still really liked it though nice work.

Longing for the one you hold dear. there's no shame in that at all. to voice your feelings in a poem is truly a sense of courage. good job

your servant:
david

This is wonderful! you did an absolutely great job on it! you really have talent. keep on writing 5/5

~Kristina

It all seems like a dream; reliving a memory. Quite a good portrayal here.
I'm generally not keen on rhyme, but you used it well; not at all forced.
On the third line of the second stanza, I think you either meant "get working" or "get to work" although if I'm honest both ways are quite poor English grammar.
It was a simple write, but in addition I don't think it was written to be anything else. Thanks for sharing.

Excellent work...
u've created perfect imagery thru your good choice of words n the emotion this poem has is very powerful n seen thru the lines...Perfect as it is
Good job!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Wow... that actually brought tears to my eyes! amazing... 5/5

This is a great poem emotion and thought were felt great job i loved it very much keep it up

laura