Woa hunny, worser..yea is worse. I've noticed that the first two stanza's are rhymed with the form: abac. And then the rest is non rhyming. Try and keep your poem with one use. The flow was a bit rocky. I saw quite a bit of grammar errors. It wwas still a good poem. Reflected on how much you think it's rediculous that this person calls you a friend.
I Like this stanza:
Instead of making me cry tears of joy
You make me cry tears of pain
Tears that are drying up so fast
You left me empty inside.....
Keep it up! God bless 4/5
<3Tayyyy

I feel a lot of anger from this poem.
Lol.
I know there's not like any curses
But it's like you're going to shout the next second.
It was kind of good.
It wasn't great.
The flow was kind unsteady
It wasn't as consistent as it could've been.
But all in all
I give it a 4/5

The flow is a little bit off at times but hey.. its a good poem! keep writting! good job!

The flow was rocky, but the emtions were so strong that it doesn't really matter. I like it. You did a good job. Thanks for the comments
4/5