Untitled (Haiku)

Ok this is my first Haiku, so be easy on me!! lol

The wind blowing leaves
The birds chirping melodies
The grass dancing free

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17 years ago
by I Seem to be the Heartless

Hey, that's pretty good. Nice job.

Josie
17 years ago
by cowgirlstar26

Pretty good, I hate using the word THE I just started writing haikus also so keep it up. diamente poems are really fun too
17 years ago
by Ashleigh Skye

I liked this however it didnt seem to have much of a feeling, I think if you used some more descriptive worse it would sound a lot better. NIce job though for your first try.
17 years ago
by Finalgravedigger

Interesting short but sweet, nice poem 5/5
17 years ago
by Kaila

It should be an atual long poem lol i liked it though nice job