It should be an atual long poem lol i liked it though nice job

Interesting short but sweet, nice poem 5/5

I liked this however it didnt seem to have much of a feeling, I think if you used some more descriptive worse it would sound a lot better. NIce job though for your first try.

Pretty good, I hate using the word THE I just started writing haikus also so keep it up. diamente poems are really fun too

Hey, that's pretty good. Nice job.

Josie