Changing is Difficult

by CHOKE   Apr 17, 2007


Crying every tear for you
The only person here for me
Missing everything that was there
Killing just to be happy

Losing my mind
Can't seem to stand
Just want to disappear
Forget all the friends

Life is full of secrets
But I didn't want to be one
Too many regrets
Lost when you won

Sorrowful am I
gasping for a single breath
Can't get a grip on life
Stuck with a game of death

Please forgive the lies
And all that ever hurt you
Changing is difficult
Words are too

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The message behind that poem, was something, that iI can relate too. You have alot of talent, and I like your poems. The one also has a good flow, and is well pinned, with an excellnt show of emtions. 5/5 I know I sound like a broken record but I don't know what tot say except if I liked it or not. I try to give an honest cmment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey hun,
    Well i did really enjoy reading that poem, and i think you deserved to win! :) (Lol know i can comment on people's work again).
    Anyways now the poem, you went back to hardly using punctuation! Lol, it could of been improved if you had. And yes i know i seem to be obsessed with punctuation usage. Im weird like that. Anyways the poem was really sad and really heartfelt. I like the end of it;
    "Changing is difficult
    Words are too"
    I ust think that concludes the poem brilliantly. And yes changing is difficult. The flow of the poem was good, it had a good steady rhythem. An excellent read! Keep wrtiing hun, i love your work! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Love it :D, 5 star!

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