You are very talented, Nice flow, well pinned. I looked foward to each line that came next. Great read. Keep up the good work 5/5 [x]

Very nice, i really couldnt stop reading it...[x]

Wow. that was great. i really liked it. i think its because in a way i can relate to some of it. you got a gift with writing. :) [x] nicely done.

This one is absolutely fantastic...
really great...
keep on writing

*isabel*

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Very good work...i like the comparisons to eachother...very unique. -unattractive1 [x]