In A So-Called Romantic Bliss

by CHOKE   Apr 17, 2007


He held a gun to her head
As she held one to his
They vowed to die together
In a so-called romantic bliss

Things were too complicated
They tried too hard
They were an unwanted love
From the very start

With pre-determined marriages
They didn't have much of a choice
But they were too in love
To let go of all of their joys

Now they've done it
With two simaltaneous bangs they died
Their lives were over
As fast as you sighed

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This one had excellent imagery. It keep my intrest all the way though it. The flow was good, and it is well pinned. A good read, and an even better write. 5/5 keep writting and I'll keep reading.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dead Inside

    This one really speaks to me. I love it.

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