The Last Kiss.

by BeautifulDisaster   Apr 18, 2007


She gazes into his dark blue eyes,
As she lightly grabs his hand.

He looks deep into her brown eyes,
Accepting her hand.

She goes to say something,
But is scared it will ruin the moment.

He slowly leans in,
Planting the sweetest little kiss on her lips.

She moves her hands to his face,
And pulls him in for another.

His hands move to her lower back,
Not wanting the moment to end.

They share a few more kisses,
Then he pulls away.

She looks confused,
Wondering what she did wrong.

His hands slowly fall,
Off her lower back.

She tries grabbing his hands,
But he quickly pulls away.

He tells her it's not right,
Because the feelings aren't there.

She asks him if that's how it is,
Then why did he kiss her different.

He simply states he didn't,
The kiss meant nothing.

She tries explaining how it was different,
That it felt like it meant something.

He says it was just a kiss,
He doesn't like her.

She says if he didn't like her,
He wouldn't have kissed her.

He says he was giving her what she wanted,
A last kiss.

She slowly backs away,
As tears start to fall.

She thinks how can this be the last kiss,
After all they have been through.

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  • 17 years ago

    by tears i cry

    I wouldnt want someone to kiss me if we were about to break up but great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This seemed more like a story than a poem, but it was still beautifully expressed.
    I noticed some words were repeated a lot which threw me off at times, but apart from that you did a good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I liked this poem. It was very deep. The word choice was excellent, for the most part. some part seemed cliche, but The stroy was intresting, again you did a wonderful job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    This was really good.. somestimes the most passion and emotion are in the last kisses because they know that they are going to be the last one. I really liked the different perspectives and how they interacted with the rest of the poem. nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    It was a great poem. But in my opinion, I think you said too much He said, She said, maybe change it a little, re-word it? Like the rest said, theres something missing, just dont know what. I'd give you a 4/5.

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