Count on me

I liked this one, but it didn't quite strike something with me like a lot of your poetry does.."A scrape of a kness, and a shock to the heart " Should kness be knees? "But know worry child of mine, i am here" Should know be no? And there is also one line in here that is not capitalized when the rest of them are. Just fix it up a bit Dear and It'll be better..it has potential. =)

It is an okay poem
honestly I didnt like the flo or rhythmn
the emotion you put into it was good

This was awesome, it made me think alot about life. keep it up

This is a very curious write, and the clever use of certain words makes it one that begs to be read more than once. Ingenious.