This is a very curious write, and the clever use of certain words makes it one that begs to be read more than once. Ingenious.

This was awesome, it made me think alot about life. keep it up

It is an okay poem
honestly I didnt like the flo or rhythmn
the emotion you put into it was good

I liked this one, but it didn't quite strike something with me like a lot of your poetry does.."A scrape of a kness, and a shock to the heart " Should kness be knees? "But know worry child of mine, i am here" Should know be no? And there is also one line in here that is not capitalized when the rest of them are. Just fix it up a bit Dear and It'll be better..it has potential. =)