Wow..very powerful poem.. It was worded perfectly and the flow was great.. I really liked how it was about "being above the influence...no following the others to fit in" That's how I took it anyways.. No complaints on this one...5/5

This poem is pretty sweet. gotta say the last few stanzas really make this poem what it is. i really like the line : godly sinfull shame. thats really a good line. good write (:

Wow great write! the stanza:
Let man take our dreams,
And throw them in our face.
It isn't as hard as it seems,
They've consumed the human race.
^^^thats an awesome stanza..your choice of words are truly great!
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This isn't one of my favorites from you, I suppose it's just the topic, however you did write it very nicely. I can see a lot of passion in this poem. 5/5.

This is sooo... sooo... amazing! another great poem from you. i wish i could write as well as this. well done 5/5

I adored this poem. What I really liked was your fresh outlook on life. Not many people see it that way, and now that I see your point of view I agree with you. Even though the world isnt quite ready for us all to stand up for what is right and stay true to our souls I belive that that's just what we have to do no matter what anyone says. And I think that you did a wonderful job of showing that. (if that isn't what you meant to say then I'm sorry but that's what I took out of this poem.)I also loved how you told it from many different angels, and the words you picked were amazing. Well done.