I loved this another great chapter posted on here by you. this is an amazing sequel. Loved the first stanza the most expecially the first two lines. Well done on this. Anothe r greatly written poem~mel

It is good 5/5 from me, and im not a huge fan of love poetry = ] but the things you do are really nice for you i have no extra advice

Wow... I agree the first stanza was great.. The whole poem..and sequel was.. Great job!!! 5/5

I like how this is an ongoing chapter, i had to go back and read the first 5 to get the gist.. and im liking it very much. i really like that you involve 2 persons, puts a sort of pro/antagonistic view on the 2 charactors, although you speak for both of them. good work (:

5/tom

Hello sir,
I love how you go with this whole thing, i feel like I'm in all this and I know all about this story. It is like a TV show that I wait to see everyday. I wait alot until I read the next part. This one was so nice

Oh i love this again. i want there to be 100 parts to this poem. more the better. if i were the person i'd cry together with the other lover.

5/5 as always. David

This is another very good poem goran, ive been keeping up with the whole saga, and this one is perfect!!! love the flow!!! i give it a 5/5!!! keep up the good work, want to read more!!!

AWwww. Another great series of this poem!
I really liked the flow. Rhyming didn't seemed forced. Great job!
God bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

I'm not to sure if I've read this correctly but it sounds like the chick died and that he is talking to "the luckies guy" and asking him what they should do. I liked this one it was a complete 360 from what I thought it would be about and I loved the suprise. Thanx again for posting it.

I'm not to sure if I've read this correctly but it sounds like the chick died and that he is talking to "the luckies guy" and asking him what they should do. I liked this one it was a complete 360 from what I thought it would be about and I loved the suprise. Thanx again for posting it.

Wow
its so confusing though. what happen to her?
she left to another place right? because I'm not sure about the other person s comment that she is dead, No, I think she left both of the guys.
Goran this is another well penned part.

Oooo another excelent poem! well she seems lik a b leavin u..anywayz good poem!

GOd I am so late on commenting your poems. I would say sorrie but u said not. lol anywho i feel like I am reading a books cuz i keep wanting to read the next one. I realy like how u write to tis guy. well just i knew who tis lucky girl is. lol dast xosh. 5/5

I really liked this poem alot. So much emotion put into this poem. Your a really good writer. Well done, 5/5!

~Chelsea

Aww of course i loved it again. it was beautiful. amazing. i loved the last stanza, it was my fav!! hopefully soon i'll find time to write another poem... haha we'll see if i have time for anything anymore! great poem again, that girl was stupid for not loving you. 5/5

I loved all 6 parts of your poems. Great job!!

Wow! if only i could write my feeling down in a poem... i know how you feel though! you did amazing and i hope this girl of yours will soon see the error of her ways! dude... i know exactly how you feel... for me i cryed for weeks when the guy i liked went out with my best friend! it hurts and im sorry! you were great 5/5!

I think that it is the best part so far. I hope to the 7th part soon:) 5/5

Just got one simple question is the poems of
the luckiest guy
real i mean is the girl a lover :) sorry to ask such a question just wondering where u get soo many feelings from to write such a nice poem

Oh wow, I found another!! You should put this with the rest. I really like how even after the other guy is no longer apart of this other guys life you still talk to him through your poems how you still relate to him. Its amazing!