Falling Back [title by my best friend; Sandy]

by Laurie Tran   Apr 18, 2007


The way you treat me like no other.
I really wish you would stop.
The way you would make me smile,
Make the corners of my mouth drop.

You cheer me up,
every time I'm feeling down.
I wish you would leave that to my friends,
It's why they wear the crown.

Don't look at me with those deep eyes,
You act as if I knew my way around.
But truth be told, I tend to get lost.
One look, and I hit the ground.

I want to get over you,
GET OUT OF MY MIND!
Once I almost get through,
You pull me back from behind.

You never notice me,
but I'm in love with you.
Why can't you let me be?
Give me time to forget you.

Every time I push you away,
the closer you became.
Then, when I want you here to stay,
your feelings were never the same.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Some parts couldve had more emotion, but overall it was good.

    the plot was really good, but i feel like u couldve executed it better.

    tho i will say it was worth the read.

    nice job
    love ya lots,
    ~sore

  • 17 years ago

    by Skye

    This is really good, I like it a lot!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Now ? It`s Perfection (:

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    LAURiE LAURiE LAURiE LAURiE !
    & you say you aren`t good at writing poetry .
    MY ARSE, sweetiee ` . I admit, I wasn`t a big fan of you`r other poems but THiS WAS GOOD (: Slight editing in that one stanza that`s shorter than the others, but still really good . You little liar, you . ;P
    I love it .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by shay

    Hey really good poem you should definatley keep up writting. wow 5/5. *shay*