Does your button-down oxford dream of irons at night?

This poem has a very deep point to it
the free flowing words which is no what I will focus on at your request delivers an unrest in the demonstration of mans inability to remain passive it the passion of disagreement, or in least how it makes me feel

Ok i don't know if this is supposed to be humorous but it was to me... the title is great and it kind of made me chuckle through the whole piece... sounds to me like everyones the same, and your saying your tired of it... and i totally agree... 5/5

Wow... oh my god, I am speechless... The title caught my attention and the poem utterly impressed me. You managed to say so much within such short piece which is remarkable and this is truly amazingly deep and refreshing, different than anything I've read before. The imagery and profound lines left me in awe. This piece fits my taste for poetry exactly: It's metaphorical and unique, with breathtaking descriptions. I can't find anything to critique here, the message is conveyed in fantastic way. I like how you connected the first line with the ending line, that gave me impression of an endless cycle as a frame to the essence of poem. Overall, greatly written piece, truly memorable, it is certainly going to my favorites.

Interesting write, I liked it, very different from what I'm used to, short and to the point.

Peace, Joe

Uhm.. you really write unique poems, I like it. Keep it up man.

I think it flowed nicely, I really like the originality of it, good job!