Comments : I Wonder...

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    How could he NOT get the message lol
    cupid made him lol :P awe this one really made me smile and gave me a small hope that perhars real love still does exist :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so beautifully written!
    I thought it flowed well throughout and the opening had me completely hooked.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a lovely poem. I love happy endings.
    Excellent job!

    I wonder if you notice
    And if you will ever see
    I wonder if you'll realise
    That we are meant to be

    This was my fav.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Aw. This was cute, and nice. Glad that guy realised :)!
    Nice write, I know what this one is like, being a guy who looks at girls in class all the time :).
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This one proves that true love does exsist, even if the other person, doesn't relize it. Good write. keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Awh, 'tis another cute and sweet write! I'm really delighted that he had realized "this" and that both of you ended up together. =P I wonder what will happen to me? lol...hm
    Keep them coming, whereas I will keep reading!
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Thats a beautiful poem!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Nice poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    You write so beautifully, you never cease to amaze me with the things you write I love them all.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brett

    That is just sincerely orgasmic ...lol

    (i didnt wanna be a ***** by just saying nice poem and being a copy cat so i had to up it a bit))((no im not calling ppl who said "nice poem" *****s..i just dont wanna copy you ^_^))

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Awww really cute write and beautifully written :)
    Amazing poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by MaRk AnD TrIsH FoReVr

    Awwwwwww beautiful poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Delicious 42

    Thats cute, its real simple but has a lot of meaning. I enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hrtbr8ker89

    Great work, keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chained4ever

    I loved this poem and i hope you keep them coming.

    Darian

  • 17 years ago

    by Brett

    Great flow really xtra cute ;) lol

    Yeah this is orgasmic as well...ur just good at that ya know? lol 5/5