Vanished Without A Trace

by Gem   Apr 18, 2007


A couple of days without you
Are driving me up the wall
Don't want to be the type of girl
Sat waiting for your call

I just sit here and wonder
If you're feeling A-okay
Time passes by so slowly
As an hour seems a day

It feels like forever
Since I last saw your face
There's no way to contact you
Vanished without a trace

I'm always thinking of you
Wondering where you are
I can't help but hope that I'm
Still the one in your heart

Cos you're still the one for me
I just want you to know
Even though you've disappeared
I'll never let my love go

*Gem*

Copyright©GemmaStott2006

(Old and fiction.. meh)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Yes, love does have a way of consuming us when deep in our hearts we know the answer. Another enjoyable poem.

    PS: I've been searching for a topic to write about and you just inspired me with this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    "It feels like forever
    Since I last saw your face
    There's no way to contact you
    Vanished without a trace"

    Your fictional write-ups are brilliantly written in a way that makes the reader feel the emotions--so real. A lovely poem, ma'dear. You never cease to enchant me by your wonderful works. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    A poem from the heart. Very good. nicely pinned and good flow. I really like your style. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very good writing. You have a way of being able to write about anything. Great job!

    It feels like forever
    Since I last saw your face
    There's no way to contact you
    Vanished without a trace

    This just brought it all together.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved the last stanza in this, it was so sad but such a beautiful read.
    As always, you did a fantastic job!