Another good poem i like your type of writing
well done

BlAcK RoSe

please comment on mine
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A hertfelt poem, nicely pennned .its real talent to write fiction with such real feelings.

Take care
chavii.

I loved the last stanza in this, it was so sad but such a beautiful read.
As always, you did a fantastic job!

Very good writing. You have a way of being able to write about anything. Great job!

It feels like forever
Since I last saw your face
There's no way to contact you
Vanished without a trace

This just brought it all together.
Take Care Love Cindy

A poem from the heart. Very good. nicely pinned and good flow. I really like your style. 5/5

"It feels like forever
Since I last saw your face
There's no way to contact you
Vanished without a trace"

Your fictional write-ups are brilliantly written in a way that makes the reader feel the emotions--so real. A lovely poem, ma'dear. You never cease to enchant me by your wonderful works. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie

Yes, love does have a way of consuming us when deep in our hearts we know the answer. Another enjoyable poem.

PS: I've been searching for a topic to write about and you just inspired me with this poem.